Czy w tym liście (mam nadzieję, że rozumiecie kontekst) są jakieś rażące błędy gramatyczne?
Hi Peter!
Thanks for your previous letter! How are you? You told me, that you met a new girl and you are loved in her. Congratulations, I hope she will be your new girlfriend! But you don't know, where should you meet. I think, the best idea is cinema (romantic film, obviously) or swimming pool. It might be very interesting... I'm waiting for your next letter with your story about your meeting with she. Goodbye!
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*lepsze będzie zamiast "you are loved in her" ->> "you fell in love with her" lub "your're in love with her" *about your meeting with her, nie she
*about your meeting with her, nie she