Question

Czy mógłby mi ktoś sprawdzić poprawnośc tego krótkiego tekstu.

Hi Hana!

J just want to remind you that in the hall of our hotel will be an exhibition decided to famous musican. The exhibition starts today at 5 p.m. J hope that you come on time. I almost forget. Bring a camera.

See you!

Answer 1

Hi Hana!

 

I just want to remind you that the exhibition dedicated to the famous musician will be in the hall of our hotel. The exhibition starts today at 5 p.m.. I hope you that you will come on time! Bring camera if you can :)

 

See you later! 

Answer 2

will be an exhibition decided to famous musican- Ta część zdania nie ma sensu. 

raczej powinno być will be an exhibition for famous musicans- będzie wystawa dla sławnych muzyków. Natomiast jesli chcesz powiedzieć będzie wystawa o sławnych muzykach to powinno być: Will be an exhibition of famous musicans.

Poprawki : 

I hope that you come on time. - I hope you will be on time.

 I almost forget - I almost forgot

bring a camera-bring the camera