Czy mógłby mi ktoś poprawić błędy w opowiadniu?
One day I was walking along the street when I saw odd-looking, tiny person. I don’t know who is he, so I gazed it. This person sitting on the bench in the shade of tree in the park. It looks like a toy. I thought it is boy but I didn’t have dead certainty.
Suddenly, he looked at me. And say: “Hi, I’m Tinty.” He’s chuckling, and one more time looked at me. Next he’s whisper: “Come, with me.” I didn’t know what I wanted to do. He pointed out that and say: “Don’t be afraid, I’m only a funny little toy. Why you don’t want to go with me?” I answer him: “I really wanted to go with you but where you going?” Tinty didn’t wait any more, catch my hand and started ran. I didn’t know where we going. At first I thought: “We go to shopping centre.” Later, I didn’t know where I am. My heart was pounding fast, I didn’t want to run. I scream: “Stop!” And then we had been in Santa Claus factory. I can’t believed my eyes. I saw many elf and of course many gifts. Tinty led me to Santa Claus home but Santa Claus was very busy, so I couldn’t speak to him. Tinty tell me about factory and when I asked him: “How to doing gifts?” He showed me everything.
Finally he say: “You must go to home.” And five minutes later I was been in my bed. Before I sleep I say: “Thank you, bye.” He answer me: “See you later, goodnight.” In the end I fell asleep. On next day I thought: “ It’s only a dream…”
THE END
One day I was walked along the street when I saw old-looking, tiny person. I don’t know who is he, so I gazed on him. This person s on the bench in the shade of tree in the park. It looks like a toy. I thought it is boy but I didn’t have dead certainty.
Suddenly, he looked at me. And say: “Hi, I’m Tinty.” He’s chuckling, and one more time looked at me. Next he’s whisper: “Come, with me.” I didn’t know what I wanted to do. He pointed out that and say: “Don’t be afraid, I’m only a funny little toy. Why you don’t want to go with me?” I answer him: “I really wanted to go with you but where you going?” Tinty didn’t wait any more, catch my hand and started ran. I didn’t know where we going. At first I thought: “We go to shopping centre.” Later, I didn’t know where I am. My heart was pounding fast, I didn’t want to run. I scream: “Stop!” And then we had been in Santa Claus factory. I can’t believed my eyes. I saw many elf and of course many gifts. Tinty led me to Santa Claus home but Santa Claus was very busy, so I couldn’t speak to him. Tinty tell me about factory and when I asked him: “How to doing gifts?” He showed me everything.
Finally he say: “You must go to home.” And five minutes later I was been in my bed. Before I sleep I say: “Thank you, bye.” He answer me: “See you later, goodnight.” In the end I fell asleep. On next day I thought: “ It’s only a dream…”