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Dear Angela,
I'm sorry I haven't written for you so long but i've been very busy, but now is okey and i feel very good. i have fantastic news for you. my mum agreed to go to you on holiday! i'm very happy! i going to go to my gradma's for the weekend becouse i miss for her. i cannot wait.
i was on class trip in London. i daw queen elizabbeth, Tower Bridge, Big Ben and i drove red bus. this was great days. we sleept in hotel. the food was not good.
i also have bad news. yesterday i broke my leg. it was misadventure on lesson PE, and recently i lost my pocket computer. my dad was angry on me. i hung out leaftlets.
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Dear Angela
I'm sorry that I haven't written to you for so long time, but I've been very busy. Now it's ok and i feel very good. I have fantastic news for you: my mum allowed me to go with you on holidays. I'm very happy!
Tommorow I am going to go to my grandparents for the weekend because I miss them and they cannot wait.
W was on class trip in London and i saw important person: queen Elizabeth. THe monuments i have seen were : Tower Bridge, Big Ben. I was drove to the centre by red double-decker. These were a great days, we slept in hotel, which in was comfortable and cosy. The food wasn't good.
Yesterday i have broken my leg. It happened on PE lessons. Apart from that, I have recently lost my pocket computer and my dad was crossed with me. Cause of that problems he cropped my pocket money.
Dont worry, It will be allright when we'll meet and above all I ache a holidays with you!
See you soon, xyz