Question

Czy możecie sprawdzić moje wypracowanie z angielskiego i wskazac moje błędy czyli gdzie je popełniłam ? Oto treść:

Sylwia,

Hi!-what's up? Everything is ok for me. I live in my new house. I really love my new place in Jarosław. It's a bit more expencive and noisier than my house in Rzeszów. It's cool!
The best thin about it is the garage. It's spacious, pink and it has a space for 3 cars with alarms. The house is not very spacious. It has onlu one living room, kitchen, bathroom and two bedrooms. The living-room is the bigest room in house. It has got very big windows so it's quite bright and airy. It faces onto the garden and it has got a lovely tarrace. I love it. The Kitchen is very spacious. It has got big windows too and we can see beautiful trees and we can heat a birds' songs. The kitchen is white, modern and bright. My bedroom is small and cramped, but it is so cool. It faces onto the town center so, as well as having an interesting view, it is also very quite. Sometimes my bedroom is very messy, but I haven't got a free time, because I have exstra lessons. I wanna have a tidy bedroom where I can learning and studying. The bathroom is dark but it's really spacious. It's simple with basic fittings and plain brown walls. The neighbours is very friendly and helpful.

That's all for now. When do you visit me? You're welcome any time.

Kasia

xxx ;*

Miłej zabawy ;D

Answer 1

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Hi, Sylwia!

what's up? Everything is ok for me. I live in my new house. I really love my new place in Jarosław. It's a little bit more expensive and it's noisier than my house in Rzeszów. But it's cool!
The best thing about it is the garage. It's spacious, pink and it has a space for 3 cars with alarms. The house is not very spacious. It has only one living room, kitchen, bathroom and two bedrooms. The living-room is the biggest room in house. It has got very big windows so it's quite bright and airy. It faces onto the garden  and it has got a lovely tarrace. I love it. The Kitchen is very spacious. It has got big windows too and we can see beautiful trees and we can hear a birds' songs.

 

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