Question

chodzi mi o sprawdzenie tzw.'tall story' czyli takiej zmyslanej historyjki pod kątem gramatycznym, czasy no i czy ogolem brzmi ok:)



When I was a child( lub jak lepiej : At last summer), I was spending my time on holiday in Grece with my family. That was very exciting time for me. I spent a lot of time on sightseeing. Once uppon a time (czy One time) , I met an amazing leprechaum. He was very small and he had pink eyes. He told me: "I'll show you all world, if you would go with me". I was telling him that I can't do this, when my parents woke me up. But that all was only a dream.

Answer 1

sprawdziłam ,  nie ma błędów ; ))

Answer 2

When I was a child, I was spending a lot of my time on holiday in Grece with my family. That was very exciting  for me. I spent a lot of time on sightseeing. One time I met an amazing leprechaum. He was very small and he had pink eyes.  "I'll show you all world, if you would go with me" - he said to me. I told him that I can't do this, but ..... Oh... Suddenly my mother woke me up.  That was just a dream