Question

chodzi mi o sprawdzenie tzw.'tall story' czyli takiej zmyslanej historyjki pod kątem gramatycznym, czasy no i czy ogolem brzmi ok:)

When I was a child( lub jak lepiej : At last summer), I was spending my time on holiday in Grece with my family. That was very exciting time for me. I spent a lot of time on sightseeing. Once uppon a time (czy One time) , I met an amazing leprechaum. He was very small and he had pink eyes. He told me: "I'll show you all world, if you would go with me". I was telling him that I can't do this, when my parents woke me up. But that all was only a dream.

Answer 1

nie moze być ''if you would go with me'' musi być bez would bo tak jest niegramatycznie!!!