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I have the honor to invite nicols on the party to celebrate session completion . will be held 20 April at the Galaxy in Krakow about the 19 at the pool. the adoption is foreseen fun: dancing with the balloon, karaoke, competition for the best swimwear. each will receive a VIP card by through which you can use all the attractions in the hotel. As far as access to the hotel you'll get it on your e-mails. You are cordially invited. Klaudia .
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poprawione zdania: It will be held on 20th of April at the Galaxy in Kraków at about 7p.m. at the pool. Every one will receive a VIP card which you can use for all the attractions in the hotel. The access to the hotel you'll get on your e-mail.