I am writing in response to the leaflet, that I found in the bookstore. I would like to give you some advices about the new magazine you want to publish.
I have several ideas that I would like to present you.
First of all I have to tell you that the idea, for creating magazine for teenagers, is outstanding. A lot of teenagers would like to read about fashion. A vast number of young people would also like to read some advices about health. And some gossips about stars.
Second of all I would like to suggest you that neither weekly nor monthly will be a good idea. I think that fortnightly will be the best.
I would like to suggest you that the magazine should have columns such as: question page (in which readers could ask questions), teenage health, fashion, humor, brain- twister. A column about computer will be a good idea too. I mean some helpful information i.e. how to create your own web side, or how to use Excel.
At the end I would like to express my opinion about your latest magazine. It was quite good, but I am afraid I must say that creating a hobby magazine is not a good thought. Nowadays adolescents do not have leisure pursuit. Young people spend a lot of their time in front of the computer.
Dear ms. Sanderson
I am writing in response to the leaflet, that I found in the bookstore. I would like to give you some advices about the new magazine you want to publish.
I have several ideas that I would like to present you.
First of all I have to tell you that the idea, for creating magazine for teenagers, is outstanding. A lot of teenagers would like to read about fashion. A vast number of young people would also like to read some advices about health. And some gossips about stars.
Second of all I would like to suggest you that neither weekly nor monthly will be a good idea. I think that fortnightly will be the best.
I would like to suggest you that the magazine should have columns such as: question page (in which readers could ask questions), teenage health, fashion, humor, brain- twister. A column about computer will be a good idea too. I mean some helpful information i.e. how to create your own web side, or how to use Excel.
At the end I would like to express my opinion about your latest magazine. It was quite good, but I am afraid I must say that creating a hobby magazine is not a good thought. Nowadays adolescents do not have leisure pursuit. Young people spend a lot of their time in front of the computer.
I am waiting for your reply
Yours sincerely
ela9511
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