There are some negative and possitive sides of coeducational schools.
I'm going to talk about some good sides.
First of all I think the presenceof the opposite sex mobilizes students to work-the want to show their best sides.
Another possitive aspect of coeducational schools is that the students won't have problems in relationships. They won't be afraid of opposite sex.
That type of school is also free for all.
On the other hand there are soe negative sides of coeducational schools.
Firsty, boys and girls mature at diffrent time and they shouldn't be in the same class, because they feel uncomfortable.
Secondly in this type of schools there are a lot of students and teacher can'tpay attention to every student.
Proszę o porawienie błędów. Można dodać coś od siebie, ale bardziej chodzi o błędy, by było poprawnie gramatycznie. Pozdrawiam
Droga Olu,
oprócz kilku literówek ('soe' zamiast 'some', czy 'to work-the' zamiast 'they'), tekst jest w całości poprawny.
W drugim zdaniu wypowiedzi zamiast "some good sides" możesz użyć advantages (zalety).
Jeśli nie chcesz używać dwuznacznego słowa sex (płeć) możesz wykorzystać słowo gender.
Pozdrawiam