The house of my dreams is located on the beach near the ocean. It's not too big or too small, it's perfect forme. It's made of brick and painted on my favorite colour, whichis red. There are some red and yellow flowers on the windowsills. There are three bedrooms upstairs and three romms downstairs: a living room, a bathroom and a kitchen with a dining room. The kichten which is painted on a light, warm coulor is very modern. We can find here all kitchen's gadgets. The living room is painted on a light brown colour which is perfectly match with old furniture. In the corner is a fireplace, which we can use for heating the house in winter. It's not only the most comfortable room in my house, but also the most stlish. In the bathroom is a huge bath, sink and mirror. Above the sink there is a shelf with mycosmetics. The bigest room in my house is my bedroom. My room is painted on a purple coulor. There is a huge bed, desk, wardrobe and computer ofcourse. Next to house there is a garden with palm trees and swimming pool, where I can spend every hot day.
The house of my dreams is a perfect place to have times with friends and my family.
proszę o sprawdzenie i poprawienie ewentualnych błędów. pytanie: powinno być painted on czy painted in? Jeszcze te zdanie pogrubione sprawdzic szczegolnie! dzieki
The house of my dreams is located on the beach near the ocean. It's not too big or too small, it's just perfect. It's made of brick and painted in my favourite colour, which is red. There are some red and yellow flowers on the windowsills. There are three bedrooms upstairs and three rooms downstairs: a living room, a bathroom and a kitchen with a dining room. The kitchen, which is painted in a light, warm colour, is very modern. We can find here all the usual kitchen gadgets. The living room is painted in a light brown colour which perfectly matches the colour of old furniture. In the corner there is a fireplace, which we can use to heat the house in winter. It's not only the most comfortable room in my house but also the most stylish. In the bathroom there is a huge bath, a sink and a mirror. Above the sink there is a shelf with my cosmetics. The biggest room in my house is my bedroom. My room is painted in a purple colour. There is a huge bed, a desk, a wardrobe and, naturally, a computer. Next to house there is a garden with palm trees and a swimming pool, where I can spend every hot day.
The house of my dreams is a perfect place to have a good time with my friends and my family.
w drugiej linijce masz napisane FORME piszmey to osobno czyli jest FOR ME
powinno być PAINTED IN
w linijce 4 piszemy ROOMS a nie romms
linijka 9 kochanieńka masz napisane słówko STLISH a piszemy STYLISH
piszey THE BIGGEST przez dwa G
w ostatnim zdaniu powinnaś napisać TO SPEND TIME WITH...i tak dalej.
a tak ogólnie jest wszystko okej