Question

Sprawdzcie mi to czy jest poprawnie jak na 6 klase . Jak coś to poprawcie błędy.
From early morning, we looked for food
Suddenly we met a monkey
She was cheerful and funny
Then we cooked the water of the sea on campfire
It was cold so we sat around the campfire
after that we went to sleep because we were exhausted.

we got up very early. We were hungry and tired.
We decided to go deep into the jungle.
There we met a lot of adventure.
Then we got back on the shore of the islnd, caught fishes and them fried.
after that we ate them.
then invented a plan how to fix the boat and we got back to the house.

Answer 1

Since the early morning we were looking for food

It was (w angielskim, małpka to rodzaj nijaki, nie jak mogłoby się wydawać, patrząc na j.polski)

Then we boiled the sea water in the campfire

There we experienced many adventures

Then we got back to the shore of this island. we caught some fish and fried them

After preparing this meal, we ate it.

Some time later we came up with an idea how to fix the boat and we got back inside the house.