Sprawdźcie czy to jest dobrze, jeśli nie to poprawcie.
In my house I feel very good. I like my room. My room is small 2m x 3 m square. It is light well. Walls are yellow. In my room there is bunk bed, because I have sister. Opposite bed there are lockers on which I have many souvenirs. There is a desk and a computer. I love play computer. Next to there is wardrobe. Next to there are two windows and parapet. On the parapet there are always a lot of flowers. In front of parapet there is the chest of drawers on which the is aquarium. In aquarium it's a lot of fish. Near bed there is chest of drawers on which I have cosmetics. On the chest of drawers is album in which I have many pictures my and my friends, because I very like spend time with they.
Nie jestem pewna co do tego on which in which i wgl. Chodzi ło mi o to, że np. na komodzie znajduje się album W KTÓRYM .....
moim zdaniem jest dobrze........ moglabyś dodać do I love play computer........... game... czyli: I love computer games
A reszta jest dobrze........... moim zdaniem oczywiście... ;)