Question

Serdecznie proszę o rzetelne sprawdzenie mojej pracy z języka angielskigeo. Bezsensowne i błędne odpowiedzi od razu zgłaszam.

Z góry dziękuję za pomoc :)

Who would you like to be in the future?

I still don’t know who I want to be in the future. I think that it’s a serious decision and it’s not good to make it too hastily. In my opinion the choice of profession is very difficult. I’m interested in many extremely different things, for example ancient history, football, music and maths. I’m interested in geography, too. I’ve got some ideas now but they can change in any time. Each of them obviously have good and bad sides. For example being a tour guide is curious and allows you travel a lot but it can be tiring and arduous, too. Detective has a work with thrill but it can also be a bit dangerous and troublesome. Another example of it is actor or actress – it’s the funny work and you can become famous however it can be embarrassing and boring because of long rehearsals. I also have no idea what earnings can be expected in each profession. If I have to be honest, there are some professions which certainly would like to make like bed tester, chute tester or game tester. You only have to sleep or play games! I think that would be a great fun and I’m sure the salary is very high. There’s only one problem with these occupations: it’s very difficult to get the job!

Answer 1

serious zamiń w hard,

Now i've got some ides but... ,

at any time, allowes you to travel,

bez too w zadaniu z tour guide,

detective is a job,

bez the przed funny work,

I also have no idea how much can i earn in each proffesin,

i think that it would be,.

 

Przepraszam jeżeli czegoś nie zauwżyłam :D

Answer 2

I’m interested in geography, too - Lepiej Im also intrested in geography.

...curious and allows you travel ... - albo ...curious and let you travel...

it’s the funny work - bez 'the'  - it's funny work

 I think that would be a great fun - wystarczy 'I think it would be fun'

 it’s very difficult to get the job! - ja bym dała 'it's very difficult to get job like this' - Trudno dostac taką pracę.

Ogólnie fajne słownictwo i ciekawie napisane :)