Prosze o sprawdzenie :P i poprawienie błędów :D bardzo ważne:D
Valentine's Day is the feast of love, which is celebrated on February 14. On that day, people send to the beloved "Valentine" - a line or a declaration of love. Sometimes, wish each other gifts. Valentine's Day is a celebration of all lovers, both those who are in love, and those who are shy and are afraid to confess his feelings.
On this day in love with or without reciprocity reciprocal send your hearts, greeting cards and give each other small gifts.
Lovers spend an evening together, eating festive dinner. On this day, people profess a love, and often kissing. Solitary bode well for a while, when I finally meet the love. In shops on Valentine's Day chocolate hearts are many and fruit lollipops in the shape of the heart.
Valentine's Day every year are becoming more popular and celebrates them more love.
...is celebrated on the 14th Februrary - liczebnik porządkowy
...the evening - przedimek określony "the", ponieważ mówimy o konkretnym wieczorze - walentynkowym
and often kiss - musi tu być użyty czas present simple
... a festive dinner - przedimek nieokreślony "a"
Zdanie: "In shops on Valentine's Day chocolate hearts are many and fruit lollipops in the shape of the heart. " powinno wyglądać tak: "In shops on Valentine's Day there are many chocolates and lilipos in the shape of the heart, fruits as well"
W ostatnim zdaniu też jest kilka błędów. Powinno ono wyglądać tak: Velentine's Day is getting more popular and love each year.