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Prosze o sprawdzeinie

Starasz się o pracę w Anglii w czasie wakacji na podstawie ogłoszenia w gazecie. Napisz list- podanie o pracę do potencjalnego pracodawcy. Określ, o jaką pracę się ubiegasz i skąd o niej wiesz, opisz swoje doświadczenia i sukcesy w pracy podobne

Dear Sir or Madam

With reference to your adventisement in newpaper, I would like to apply for the job as a shop assistant.

Firstly, I am 19 years old and I have finished upper secondary economic school. I worked in that kind of job in England in the summer in 2008 and 2009 year. My boss was very satisfied of my work so I always got an extra money.

Secondly, I would like to present my two biggest advantages. I am good at dealing withpeople, so I should not have any problems with customers. And I am keen on math, so I will not make any mistakes with money.

I speak English very well. I lived in England by some months where I worked and I had to speak this language all the time.

I hope you will take my application. I look forward to hearing from you.
XYZ

Z góry dzieki, Przemek.

Answer 1

chyba jest ok. :)

Answer 2

adventisement jest źle, powinno być advertisement

withpeople - with people (wiem, że to po prostu pomyłka, ale jak poprawiać to wszystko)

And I am keen on math - lepiej nie zaczynaj zdania od and :P oraz powinno być "in math" (good in math etc).
I lived in England by some months (tu bym tego "by" nie dawał, ale z tym też nie jest źle)

 

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