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temat : what's the different between a real friend and acquaitance. What wa the different depend on.
In my presentation i would like to saya few words about the different between a real friend and an acquaitance. What is a real friend? A real friend listen to each other and give good advice. A real friend will laught with you and not at you when you make a fool of yourself, will believe in you when you don't believe in yourself or when no one else believe in you. A real friend will always tell you the truth. I think these are the most important features a friend. Now I would like to tell who is an acquaitance. In my opinion acquaitance is someone who i know but who isn't a close friend. An acquaitance doesn't have to be honest for us. Sometimes we just say „hello” for this person and nothing more. I think it's a shallow knowledge. I belive the real friend is unusal and we should respect it. A real friend we usually have only one. Acquaitance we always have a lot in work or shool.
no to tak:
1. wszędzie piszesz "acquaitance", powinno być "acquaintance
2. A real friend listens to each other and gives good advice.Myślę też, że powinno być "advices" ponieważ on daje dobre rady, a nie radę. w każdym razie tak lepiej brzmi;>
3. powinno być "school", ale podejrzewam, że to tylko literówka;) tak samo jak raz chyba napisałaś "belive" zamiast "believe". myślę, że to wiesz, ale wolałam o tym Ci powiedzieć, bo może np. to drukujesz i nie zwróciłaś na to uwagi.
tak po za tym myślę, że raczej wszystko dobrze, choć nie gwarantuję tego. sama się dopiero uczę angielskiego;) powodzenia:>