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PROSZĘ O SPRAWDZENIE, ZALEŻY MI BARDZO ŻEBY BYŁA DOBRA GRAMATYKA. The while ago I visting my family in Tatry. In the first day I,my cousin and my grandfather were eating terrible sheep cheese. After we were bought souvenirs. Last day we went into mountain. We climbing up when started avalanche. I and my grandfather were rescues ourselves, but my cousine lost. We called to rescue service. They arrived quickly. Rescue workers found my cousine. We were happy. Later we came back to house. In the end we drank cacao and ate cookies.

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Poprawnie: "The while ago I was visiting my family in Tatry. In first day me, my cousin and my grandfather were eating terrible sheep cheese. After we bought souvenirs. Last day we went into mountain. Me and my grandfather rescued ourselves, but my cousine lost (?). We called a rescue service. They arrived quickly. Rescue workers found my cousine. We were happy. Later we came back to house. In the end we drank cacao and ate cookies.".