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Dear Anna!
How are you?I would like to thank you very much for the great time staying with you in Liverpool.
I'm very grateful for everything you have done for me.
I'm having 17 birthday party on 19th July.
We are organising a rock concert.On my birthday will play a school band.There will be a lot of attractions and food.After concert we are organising movie night.It's going to be great!
Would you like to come?The party will take place at my cousin's club.I'm inviting about twenty people, mostly my friends from school.
Last year my sixteen birthday was very successful.We danced until 2 in the morning and we organised a karaoke competition.It was great!Please let me know if you can come.
Cheers XYZ
Dear Anna!
How are you?I would like to thank you very much for the great time staying with you in Liverpool.
I'm very grateful for everything you have done for me.
I'm having 17 birthday party on 19th July.
We are organising a rock concert.On my birthday will play a school band.There will be a lot of attractions and food.After concert we are organising movie night.It's going to be great!
Would you like to come?The party will take place at my cousin's club.I'm inviting about twenty people, mostly my friends from school.
Last year my sixteen birthday was very successful.We danced until 2 in the morning and we organised a karaoke competition.It was great!Please let me know if you can come.
Cheers XYZ
martazawada
Moim zdaniem po przeczytaniu wszystko jest w porządku
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natala4710
No nie wiem, ale raczej OK.
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