Question

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Hi Jacob,

I’m very happy that you decided to visit Poland. I can’t wait for your visit.

Don’t forget about the camera. In Poland there are so much beautiful places that you must perpetuate.

I hit on a great idea. I decided to arrange the party during your stay in Poland. I want to invite our common friends. How about that? What date do you propose? I want to arrange this party on the Japanese Garden because there is an uncanny vibe there and I know how you love Japan.

I have a request to you. Please, take along my Led Zeppelin’s album. I forgot its when I visited you last month.

Tu mam napisać, że odbiorę go z lotniska, ale nie wiem, jak będzie brzmieć to zdanie, więc prosze o pomoc.

Answer 1

W pierwszym zdaniu napisała bym po prosty "I can`t wait for you " bardziej mi to brzmi  A zamiast " I hit on a great idea możesz napisać I have great idea" Tak to myśle że wszytsko ok .

I take you from airport at np 7 o `clock może tak być.?;) 

Answer 2

mi lepeij pasuje: "there are so much beautiful places in Poland that you musst perpetuate.", "I had great idea".

I will collect you from the airport at (przykładowo) four p.m.

mam nadzieję, że pomogłam ;)