Proszę o sprawdzenie i ewentualne poprawienie, miałam napisać reklamę jakiegoś ubrania.
Super leather jacket is on sale !
I'd like to advertise this fantastic clothes which is perfect for every women who is looking for something nice and elegant. This jacket is made from 100% of snake's skin, so it's warm, windproof and also waterproof, so you can wear it wherever and whenever! The price of this beautiful siut is attractive for everyone - only 250£! Don't wait: offer valid while stock lasts!
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jak dla mnie cała promocja tego ubrania jest okej, tak mi sie wydaje ;)
Zamiast siut "suit". Ale pewnie źle przepisałeś/aś. Gramtycznie dobrze. ;)