Question

Proszę o poprawienie mojego listu, bo domyslam się że są błędy i jakoś mało rozbudowane to. A oto treść zadania: Właśnie wróciłeś z wakacji. Napisz list do kolegi:

-na jakie wakacje się wybrałeś, gdzie zdobyłeś ofertę

-jak zwykle spędzałeś czas, pogoda

-2 dobre strony wyjazdu i 2 złe

-zachęć kolegę na wyjazd za rok

A oto mój list, proszę o poprawienie błędów bo to na ocenę jest:

Hi Kasia. I was in 2 weeks camp at the seaside. I found this offert at advertisement in my school. When I woke up and got dresses I was running in the forest I ate breakfast and cleaned in my room. I went shopping to the city and came back to dinner. Next I went on the beach and i sunbathed. Finnaly I ate supper and I had free ime. Positive things are I kept fit and I've got a sunbrown. Negative thinks are I was bitted by many mosquitos and twisted my ankle. This camp was exciting. Will you go with me in next year ?

Answer 1

 

tu jest poprawiony list:

 

 

 

 

Hi Kasia.

I was in 2 weeks camp at the seaside. I found this offert in advertisement at my school. When I woke up and got dressed I was running in the forest I ate breakfast and clean up in my room. I went shopping to the city and came back to dinner. Next I went on the beach and i sunbathed. Finally I ate supper and I had free time. Positive things are I kept fit and I've got a tan. Negative thinks are I was bitten by many mosquitos and twisted my ankle. This camp was exciting. Will you go with me in next year ?

 

 

 

tyle błędów znalazłam