Question

proszę o poprawienie gdyby coś było nie tak to ma byc list oficjalny po angielsku

Madam

I am writing to express their dissatisfaction with the noise in the evenings. and the garbage that is thrown at the cage.
I do not like is that after an hour to 22 hours of the morning a loud that you can not sleep but it must be silent. Young people from the apartment next to the party is carrying out every day what I did not like it because the noise of lapping silence. Also, do not hide their dissatisfaction because of the garbage being thrown on the staircase.
then you need to clean up after them.
Very please to deal with it because this is not possible any longer.
I hope that this will be done as it should be

proszę jak najszybciej

Answer 1

I'm writing to express their dissatisfaction with the noise in the evenings. and the garbage that is thrown at the cage. 
I don't like is that after an hour to 22 hours of the morning a loud that you can't sleep but it must be silent. Young people from the apartment next to the party is carrying out every day what I didn't like it because the noise of lapping silence. Also, don't hide their dissatisfaction because of the garbage being thrown on the staircase. 
then you need to clean up after them. 
I begin to deal with it because this is not possible any longer. 
I hope that this will be done as it should be

Answer 2

I am writing to express their dissatisfaction with the noise in the evenings. and the garbage that is thrown at the cage.
I do not like is that after an hour to 22 hours of the morning a loud that you can not sleep but it must be silent. Young people from the apartment next to the party is carrying out every day what I did not like it because the noise of lapping silence. Also, do not hide their dissatisfaction because of the garbage being thrown on the staircase.
then I ( nie 'you' bo jak sądzę napisałaś to językiem potocznym czyli 'musisz potem sprzątać', a powinno być 'muszę' czyli TY nie ta osoba do której się zwracasz)  )  need to clean up after them.
Very please to deal with it because this is not possible any longer.
I hope that this will be done as it should be.

 

wszystko jest raczej dobrze. jeśli wolisz pisać did not a nie didnt to raczej wszystko jest napisane poprawnie  i w odpowiedni sposób do zaistniałej sytuacji. i przy okazji współczuję