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Hello Edyta,
I have just come back from a cinema where I had seen a film "Hobbit". This is a film connecting genre the fantasy and adventure film.
It was really fantasic film. He gave me much emotions, although some of the scenes and dialogues I could not understand.
When I saw the excitement on the faces of other people I was sure that this movie they very like it. They were all impressed.
Best, XYZ
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Czwarte zdanie: Lepiej użyć nie HE, a IT. (...)'' I DIDN'T UNDERSTAND some scenes and dialogues'' . Według mnie tak bezpieczniej.
A tak to może być ;) Pozdrawiam
Hello Edyta,
I have just come back from the cinema where I had watched this new film called "Hobbit". It is a film connecting genre of the fantasy and the adventure films.
It was really fantasic film. It was so funny and amazing, although there were some scenes and dialogues which I could not understand.
When I saw the excitement on the faces of other people I was asured that this film will be a pearl among the other fantasy movies because they were all impressed.
Best,
XYZ