Question

Proszę o poprawę tego tekstu. Napisałem to w 5 minut i jest pełno błędów, a nie chce mi sie szukać :)

This place – Vencie is beautiful! I and my parents arrived here at eight o’clock last night. We’re so tired. We’re staing in a hotel next to St Mark’s Square. Next day morning We were sightseeing St Merk’s Square, and see the famous Rialto bridge over grand canal. When We finish this, we’re going to dinner at restaurant. I’m write this post in this restaurant. Nex we Ill going to sunbathe, ang eat dinnet in a real Italian pizzeria.

Answer 1

This place-Vencie is beatifully!!! I and my parants arrived here at eight o'clock last night. We are so tired. We are staing  in a Hotel next to ST Mark's Square. Next day morning we were sightseeing ST Mark's Square , and saw famous Rialto bridge over grand canal. When we finished this , we are went to dinner at restaurant. I am wrote this post in this restaurant. Next we went  to sunbathe , and ate dinner in a real Italian pizzeria.

 

Nie wiem czy dobrze , ale ja mam 6 z anglika więc chyba tak.

Z góry przepraszam jak źle:)

Answer 2

Venice is beautiful ! Me and my parents arrived there at 8 o 'clock last night.We were so tired. we're staying at the hotel, that is next to st mark's square. The next morning we were sightseeing st mark's square , and we saw famous bridge ,,Rialto" over grand canal.When we finidhed sightseeing, we went to a restaurant for dinner. (I wrote this post at the restaurant).  after that we went to sunbath, and then we went for a pizza to a real italian pizzeria.

wydaje mi sie że tak jest dobrze ;) napisałam w czasie przeszłym, bo nie wiedziałam w jakim chcesz. 

pozdro;) mam nadzieje ze pomoglam!!;D