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Proszę o poprawę błędów w poniższym tekście: In my picture the colours are blue, because it’s my favourite color, green, because it’s color of nature, and yellow, because it’s positive, and bright. There are two photos of me. In the first photo I’m cycling. It’s my favourite activity, because I like admire a beautiful landscape. In the second photo I’m listening the music. Music is very important in my life. I listen a rock and metal music – Green Day, System of a Down, and few other band. There are other people , places, and objects in my picture. You can see that I’m interested ski jumping. I like people who are funny, and friendly.

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In my picture the colours are blue as it’s (urozmaicenie od because) my favourite color, green, because it’s color of nature, and yellow, because it’s positive and bright. There are two photos of me. In the first photo I’m cycling. It’s my favourite activity, because I like to admire a beautiful landscape. In the second photo I’m listening to the music. Music is very important in my life (jak już tak napisałeś, powinieneś podać też powód - dlaczego jest tak ważna? np. Music is very important in my life, because I like to listen to it when I'm angry and I have troubles. Sometimes it helps me to understand some difficult things in my life). I listen rock and metal music – Green Day, System of a Down, and few other bands. There are other people , places, and objects in my picture. You can see that I’m interested in ski jumping. I like people who are funny and friendly.