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Proszę o korektę!!!
Robię z koleżanka prezentację o jesieni. Proszę sprawdźcie tę tragedię!
Nawet jeżeli jest poprawnie ale macie coś do dodania to bardzo proszę pomóżcie!!!

A:
Autumn is the most beautiful season. The sceneries are very colorful.
We can often see children who are playing with leaves. The leaves can be orange, red, yellow and brown. Here we have oak leaves (na plakacie są liście dębu)
B:
It saunds great! And it is... but not always. At this time we can easily catch cold. Do you know that in autumn the temperature is usually between 5*C and 15*C?
I autumn we have the most of types of mushrooms (przykładem będzie : boletus)
A:
We have to remember that we switch our clocks one hour back. So, don't be like be and don't come to school before 7 o'clock.
In our opinion the long, autumn's evenings are the best time for reading!

DAJĘ NAAAAAAJ :((((
*mega przerażona prezentacją*

Answer 1

A: ok
B:
It sounds great! And it is... but not always. We can easily catch a cold at this time. Do you know that the temperature in autumn is usually between 5*C and 15*C? We also have the most types of mushrooms in autumn.``
A:
We have to remember to set our clocks one hour back. So, don't make the same mistake as me and don't come to school before 7 o'clock.
In our opinion, autumn's long evenings are the best time for reading!