Potrzebuje naniesienia poprawek w tekście tak, aby brzmiał w miarę logicznie. Jeżeli możecie zaproponować lepsze tłumaczenie (TO nie jest moje), proszę zróbcie to. Tekst po polsku i "angielsku" jest w załączniku.
It was a beautiful, sunny morning. There were no signs that it will be raining in the evening , but in autumn it’s normal. My fur, and her clothes were heavy with water. Then she found me and brought me home, so I'm her cat.
She was kind like a mother and beautiful like a lover, so I soon began to like her. She lived alone, she woke up every morning at 6 am. She combed her hair, a little powdered and perfumed, she put her hand on my head and said 'I’m going out'. Then she straightened up, opened the heavy steel door and disappeared.
It was in those days, she came back and after a very, very long phone call she started to cry. Only I saw her, she has always been the most beautiful, the kindest and lived honestly more than anyone else. I hear her voice, can somebody ... anybody, anybody ... "Can anybody help me?"
Then winter came. Despite all these sorrows ... I, and may be also her, we probably like this world.
It was a beautiful, sunny morning. There were no signs that it will be raining in the evening , but in autumn it’s normal. My fur, and her clothes were heavy with water. Then she found me and brought me home, so I'm her cat.
She was kind like a mother and beautiful like a lover, so I soon began to like her. She lived alone, she woke up every morning at 6 am. She combed her hair, a little powdered and perfumed, she put her hand on my head and said 'I’m going out'. Then she straightened up, opened the heavy steel door and disappeared.
It was in those days, she came back and after a very, very long phone call she started to cry. Only I saw her, she has always been the most beautiful, the kindest and lived honestly more than anyone else. I hear her voice, can somebody ... anybody, anybody ... "Can anybody help me?"
Then winter came. Despite all these sorrows ... I, and may be also her, we probably like this world.