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A minute after Christina had entered the room, she knew something was wrong. At first everything seemed normal, but when she went to the window, she saw the inscription :Coming soon to regret". Christina was frightened. She doesn't know what you mean. suddenly the phone rang, but when she picked up the phone no one said anything. Christina thought it was a joke, so she went to the kitchen to prepare the food. Suddenly the lights went out. she took a candle and went to checked it out. passind next to the room she noticed that the inscription is shine. Frightened, she ran out of the house and wanted to call the police, but the phone was busy. She returned to home and she went to sleep. Thye next day her sister Mia was dissapeared. Christina went to the police, but she hadn't found out anything. She didn't know what to do. suddenly the phone rang when she received voice said: If you want recove a sister, come on the hill in the night and get the money". The girl was afraid, but she decided to save a sister. She told the police what happened. Then she took the money and went the hill. When she got there she saw her sister. She ran to her. Suddenly someone in the mas pushed her. He took a gun and he had to kill her when suddenly the police came. The police arrested him. Christina drove sister to home. The End
Według mnie wszystko jest dobrze :)
Thye next day - będzie the next day chyba , ze zle wcisnęłaś klawisz i Ci się tak napisało
jeszczę to zdanie : Christina drove sister to home to brakuje with Christina drove with sister to home. tak to wszystko jest ok ..
:)