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Oscar grew up in a small province called Paramonga. When He was 10 years old he moved to the city of Lima leaving his friends to start a new life. After the move, Oscar was determined to get along with the kids in his class but they weren't very friendly whit him. But he was determined not to give up. One day a new girl had moved to her neighborhood, so her parents went to receive them, at that time Oscar knew Karen who was his same age and also would go to his same class, at first he was very shy because he was afraid of being rejected again, but she approached and asked him to be his friend and he accepted. They grew up together going unforgettable moments. When they were in fifth grade of secondary, Oscar asked Karen to be his girlfriend and she didn't accept him for fear of losing him forever. Oscar became very sad and decided to return to Paramonga with his grandmother
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HOLA PORFAVOR NECESITO QUE REVISEN LAS RESPUESTAS, SOLO LA ORTOGRAFIA 1) which documents should you shred? Do you shred them? I must destroy the documents that contain some key or when my personal information is very important. Yes, the blade broke it in small pieces or it can also be burned. 2) Do you memorize your PINs? would you ever tell anymore your PIN? If I memorize the PIN but sometimes I forget, that's why it's good to have it pointed in a safe place. 3) Where do you keep important documents? Do you have copies of them? I keep my important documents in a box and in my closet. Yes, I have an additional copy in an emergency. 4) What do you have passwords for? How can you choose a good password? • I have passwords to safeguard my personal information, my savings account and debit card. • Well.... For me a good password should have no relation to my birthday, but it may be the combination of important dates. 5) How can you shop safely online or on the phone? I can buy securely on websites known, also when my network and web are safe. 6) what can you do protect your credit or debit card information? To protect the data of my card I check the movements of my account daily and at the time of purchase I cover my password. Also, I do not accept help from strangers to enter my password but if by carelessness I lose or the card is stolen I will cancel it immediately. 7) what precautions do you take when you use an ATM? First I cover the code of my card so that nobody sees it. Also, I do not let any stranger approach me and I always watch if there is anyone curious around. The ATM I use should be located in a safe area but above all I would not use it in the evenings. 8) how else can people keep their personal information safely? They should not accept friend requests from strangers, configure the privacy of their accounts and should navigate to trusted sites.
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Hola, me podrian ayudar porfavor. Quiero saber si este parrafo esta bien escrito y si se observa claramente que estoy respondiendo estas preguntas: 1) Who do you admire? 2) Why? 3) What do you have in common? 4) How are you different? Les pido su ayuda porfavor, porque es para una exposición ☺☺ PARRAFO: I admire my mom, because she's reliable, generous, honest and strong. I can trust my mom, because I know that I will never be disappointed and will be by my side supporting me in the most difficult moments of my life. Besides helping people, giving them clothing and food, but above all preaching to them of the love of God. We're very similar in some ways. We love to worship God from the bottom of our heart. Also, we don't watch TV but we do see news on the computer, we love to watch comedy movies and with a little romance and we hate horror movies. The differences we have, is that my mom is very strong and does not let herself beat easily for the problems but I'm a bit weak in that aspect. Also, my mom's very organized and I'm pretty disorganized. PSDT: este es un ejemplo del libro Marina Ooh, good question . . . Um, my sister. She's really generous. I mean, she's always helping people. Like, she volunteers at a hospital on weekends and everything. We're very similar in some ways. Like, we're both into sports, and we're extremely competitive. Yeah, we both try really hard to win. But I guess she's pretty disorganized. You know, she doesn't always plan things well, and I'm – well, I am pretty organized.
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Hola, quiero saber si este parrafo esta bien escrito y si se observa claramente que estoy respondiendo estas preguntas: 1) Who do you admire? 2) Why? 3) What do you have in common? 4) How are you different? Les pido su ayuda porfavor, porque es para una exposición ☺☺ PARRAFO: I admire my mom, because she's reliable, generous, honest and strong. I can trust my mom, because I know that I will never be disappointed and will be by my side supporting me in the most difficult moments of my life. Besides helping people, giving them clothing and food, but above all preaching to them of the love of God. We're very similar in some ways. We love to worship God from the bottom of our heart. Also, we don't watch TV but we do see news on the computer, we love to watch comedy movies and with a little romance and we hate horror movies. The differences we have, is that my mom is very strong and does not let herself beat easily for the problems but I'm a bit weak in that aspect. Also, my mom's very organized and I'm pretty disorganized. PSDT: este es un ejemplo del libro Marina Ooh, good question . . . Um, my sister. She's really generous. I mean, she's always helping people. Like, she volunteers at a hospital on weekends and everything. We're very similar in some ways. Like, we're both into sports, and we're extremely competitive. Yeah, we both try really hard to win. But I guess she's pretty disorganized. You know, she doesn't always plan things well, and I'm – well, I am pretty organized.
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HOLA, ayúdenme por favor, pueden revisar el guion y decirme si esta bien escrito, es que mañana tengo una exposición, ya me lo se pero tengo dudas sobre la escritura, se lo agradeceré mucho. My trip In all my life I only made two trips. But this time I'll just tell you about my first trip to New York - New Jersey to visit my family, since I had not seen them since I was a baby. On December 21, 2015 we packed our bags, because the next day we were going to travel. The next day shared funny moments with my dear friend Laura better known as Laly. And at night my dad and my brother Kevin fired us at the Jorge Chávez Airport. On the 23rd at 6:00 am we arrived at the Newark - New Jersey International Airport. My aunts, cousins and my uncle received us with a big hug and with tears in our eyes, because we saw each other after a long time. Then we took pictures to remember the pleasant moment and went to my aunt Meche's house. That day we had dinner with the family and talked about things that happened in the time we did not see each other. Also, I was able to spend time with my little cousins. On December 24, we went to Walmart to buy some things that we needed. To get to Walmart we went by train, it was practically our first train trip. My mom did not like it very much that I'm near the train stop, since I thought I was going to fall. After the shopping we made some preparations to spend Christmas in family. My Aunt Lupe prepared turkey, pork and chicken. At midnight we all open our gifts and it was also a wonderful time. On December 31, my cousins and I inaugurated their new game Just Dance 4, all afternoon we danced, while my uncles arranged everything to celebrate the New Year. That day was wonderful, because Christ entered the life of all my uncles and cousins, was the best of all day. On January 1, we went to the central park to see the big Christmas tree, since it was still there. We also observed a light function and it was very beautiful. January 7, 2016 was my birthday and I was going to meet 17, so my uncles did a great preparation to celebrate, that day they cooked pork and it was delicious. For me that day was very beautiful, because it was the first time I celebrated in family my birthday and I loved it. Also, I received many gifts and I am grateful to all my family for everything they did. January 9th was the birthday of my cousin Aylin. She was going to meet 10 years old and we also had a celebration. January 10 was my brother Eluard's birthday. He was going to meet 25 and we also had a party. Also, my uncle made ceviche and it is very delicious. On January 14 we went to Manhattan again to be able to observe the statue of liberty. We went to the pier and bought tickets for the ferry, that was my first trip on a ferry and it was great.
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