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My trip
In all my life I only made two trips. But this time I'll just tell you about my first trip to New York - New Jersey to visit my family, since I had not seen them since I was a baby.
On December 21, 2015 we packed our bags, because the next day we were going to travel.
The next day shared funny moments with my dear friend Laura better known as Laly. And at night my dad and my brother Kevin fired us at the Jorge Chávez Airport.
On the 23rd at 6:00 am we arrived at the Newark - New Jersey International Airport. My aunts, cousins and my uncle received us with a big hug and with tears in our eyes, because we saw each other after a long time. Then we took pictures to remember the pleasant moment and went to my aunt Meche's house.
That day we had dinner with the family and talked about things that happened in the time we did not see each other. Also, I was able to spend time with my little cousins.
On December 24, we went to Walmart to buy some things that we needed. To get to Walmart we went by train, it was practically our first train trip. My mom did not like it very much that I'm near the train stop, since I thought I was going to fall.
After the shopping we made some preparations to spend Christmas in family. My Aunt Lupe prepared turkey, pork and chicken. At midnight we all open our gifts and it was also a wonderful time.
On December 31, my cousins and I inaugurated their new game Just Dance 4, all afternoon we danced, while my uncles arranged everything to celebrate the New Year. That day was wonderful, because Christ entered the life of all my uncles and cousins, was the best of all day.
On January 1, we went to the central park to see the big Christmas tree, since it was still there. We also observed a light function and it was very beautiful.
January 7, 2016 was my birthday and I was going to meet 17, so my uncles did a great preparation to celebrate, that day they cooked pork and it was delicious. For me that day was very beautiful, because it was the first time I celebrated in family my birthday and I loved it. Also, I received many gifts and I am grateful to all my family for everything they did.
January 9th was the birthday of my cousin Aylin. She was going to meet 10 years old and we also had a celebration.
January 10 was my brother Eluard's birthday. He was going to meet 25 and we also had a party. Also, my uncle made ceviche and it is very delicious.
On January 14 we went to Manhattan again to be able to observe the statue of liberty. We went to the pier and bought tickets for the ferry, that was my first trip on a ferry and it was great.
My trip
In all my life I only made two trips. But this time I'll just tell you about my first trip to New York - New Jersey to visit my family, since I had not seen them since I was a baby.
On December 21, 2015 we packed our bags, because the next day we were going to travel.
The next day shared funny moments with my dear friend Laura better known as Laly. And at night my dad and my brother Kevin fired us at the Jorge Chávez Airport.
On the 23rd at 6:00 am we arrived at the Newark - New Jersey International Airport. My aunts, cousins and my uncle received us with a big hug and with tears in our eyes, because we saw each other after a long time. Then we took pictures to remember the pleasant moment and went to my aunt Meche's house.
That day we had dinner with the family and talked about things that happened in the time we did not see each other. Also, I was able to spend time with my little cousins.
On December 24, we went to Walmart to buy some things that we needed. To get to Walmart we went by train, it was practically our first train trip. My mom did not like it very much that I'm near the train stop, since I thought I was going to fall.
After the shopping we made some preparations to spend Christmas in family. My Aunt Lupe prepared turkey, pork and chicken. At midnight we all open our gifts and it was also a wonderful time.
On December 31, my cousins and I inaugurated their new game Just Dance 4, all afternoon we danced, while my uncles arranged everything to celebrate the New Year. That day was wonderful, because Christ entered the life of all my uncles and cousins, was the best of all day.
On January 1, we went to the central park to see the big Christmas tree, since it was still there. We also observed a light function and it was very beautiful.
January 7, 2016 was my birthday and I was going to meet 17, so my uncles did a great preparation to celebrate, that day they cooked pork and it was delicious. For me that day was very beautiful, because it was the first time I celebrated in family my birthday and I loved it. Also, I received many gifts and I am grateful to all my family for everything they did.
January 9th was the birthday of my cousin Aylin. She was going to meet 10 years old and we also had a celebration.
January 10 was my brother Eluard's birthday. He was going to meet 25 and we also had a party. Also, my uncle made ceviche and it is very delicious.
On January 14 we went to Manhattan again to be able to observe the statue of liberty. We went to the pier and bought tickets for the ferry, that was my first trip on a ferry and it was great.
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