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Dear Mr Jim Aston,
I am writing to apply for a job of group leader, which was advertised in „Dziennik”. I am 21 years old and I graduated in Pedagogy from Jagiellonian University. At present I am working part -time at kindergarten. I speak English and Spanish fluently. I would like to gain some valuable experience working with kids, as I am considering a carrer in the education. I have been interested in working with people. Beside of job in kindergarten, I also worked in Gallery „Sztuka” as animator and I was responsible for organization of many activities for children and youth. Thanks to previous jobs I am well-organized and I can work in group with young people. I can be connected at the above adress, by telephone on 555-1234 or via e-mail [email protected] . I look forward yo your reply.
Yours sincerly ABC
At present I am working part -time at kindergarten.
Wszystko w porządku. Widzę, że zostało to napisane w kilku czasach (Present Perfect, Present simple, a nawet Present Continius).