Poproszę o poprawki jak są. I usually get up at 6 o'clock. Then I brush my teeth and get dressed. After I have breakfast and I go to school. I'm almost always in a rush. I usually spend seven hours in school and come back home. After I do homework and play computer games. I meet my friends and go to the SKS in the afternoon. Then I have dinner and watch TV. Before I g to sleep I go to take the shower. Z góry dziękuję.
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Poprawiłam ci tylko w pierwszym zdaniu i jest okej teraz : D
I usually get up wake up at 6 o'clock. Then I brush my teeth and get dressed. After I have breakfast and I go to school. I'm almost always in a rush. I usually spend seven hours in school and come back home. After I do homework and play computer games. I meet my friends and go to the SKS in the afternoon. Then I have dinner and watch TV. Before I go to sleep I go to take the shower.
Myślę ,że zamiast tego zdania " I'm almost always in a rush" bardziej pasowałoby "I'm almost always busy" .
I takie małe poprawki :
After I do homework and I play computer games. I meet my friends and I go again to school for extra PE lessons in the afternoon. Then I have dinner and I watch TV. Before I go to bed I take the shower.
I to chyba tyle :)