Poprawcie mi ten tekst ( past simple ) bo nie wiem czy jest dobrze ;)
My first holiday without parents - just me and my best friend Ola.
We were in London . It's amazing city .We spent there 8 days. We lived in huge hotel , we had nice , large room . Ewery day we walked for long walks . We saw London Eye , Tower Bridge ,Buckingham Palace , Big Ben - evrything was beatiful . We met many new great friend's . They has just show us the best London shop where we did shopping . We felt wonderfully in London . I wish that we were there for such a short .
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My first holiday without parents - just me and my best friend Ola.
We were in London . It's an amazing city .We spent there 8 days. We lived in a huge hotel , we had nice , large room . Every day we walked for a long walks . We saw London Eye , Tower Bridge ,Buckingham Palace , Big Ben - evrything was beatiful . We met many great friends . They showed us the best shop in London, where we were shopping . We felt wonderfully in London . I wish we were there longer.
jeśli ma to być na pewno w past simple, to powinno być ok :)