Popraw błędy w liście (jeśli są) i oceń go 1-3 zdaniami.
Dear Santa Claus!
Santa Claus, I please you to good luck for the entrie year , becouse it is a be useful. Also ask you to knowledge at school can not be live without it. I ask you to love to fell loved. I would like tto recive Toyota with Asia in the middle. I would like to fortune oblu a little. I beg at patiience becouse some people annay me mercilessly. O want a bit of succes in the futore. I thing that listen to my request ond fulfill them.
I greet!
Your beloved Simon.
bez tego be przed usefull.
useful - poprawnie usefull
becouse- poprawnie because
Tam powinno być I Also ask you to know...
annay? może anyway / potem zamiast me to my
foture = future.
ond = and
Kurcze, poza tymi błędami tekst jest troche źle napisany.. Daj tekst na główną po polsku, to przetłumaczę ja albo ktoś inny:)
Generalnie list jest nie spojny mnostwo błedów. Trudno zrozumieć przekaz tego listu aczkolwiek pomoge ci go napisac :) Po mojemu to by szlo tak:
Dear Santa Claus!
I ask you for good luck during entire year, because it is very needed in my life. I also ask you for getting appropriate knowledge at school because we cannot live without it. I ask you also for love. I want to fall in love with somebody. I would like to get new Toyota from the middle Asia. I also would like to rise my fortune a little at least. I beg you for patience because some people annoy me terribly. I want also to succeed in the future. I hope you will listen to my request and you will fullfill my dreams.
mam nadzieję, że dobrze zrozumiałem o co ci chodziło w tym liscie i ze ci pomoglem chociaz troche :)