Question

Otóż napisałem list motywacyjny na język angielski i chciałbym, żeby ktoś kto dobrze ten język zna, przeczytał go i powiedział mi, jakie w nich widzi błędy i jak mógłbym je poprawić. Oto treść:

Dear Mr Jackman,

I would like to apply for the position of receptionist in your hotel. I found advertise, while reading local newspaper. I’m living in London for a year and I was working as receptionist in “Shiny Star Hotel”. I lost my job, when the hotel went close, so I’m interested to work for you.

I have quite good experience in trade hotel. When I worked in “Shiny Star Hotel” I was working as receptionist. I was also greeting visitors and carrying bags. I know every rules of etiquette, so I know how to take care of yours guests.

I’m hard working and discreet person which are really useful feature in this job. I’m not afraid any work. If I must do something which is not duties, I won’t complain. My discreet effect, yours visitors won’t fell constraint.

I’m enclosing my CV and references. If my application will be accept, I’m ready to come on job interview.

I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely.

Answer 1

"i found an advertisment"

"while riding a lokcal newspapper"

"I'm interested in working for you"

"I have a quite good experience"

"When I worked in “Shiny Star Hotel” except working as receptionist. I was also greeting..."

Ze zdania "I’m hard working and discreet person which are really useful feature in this job." napisz tylko "I’m hard working and discreet person"

"I’m not afraid of any work."

 

A tak to reszta dobrze.

 

Answer 2

I had been living in London for a year and I worked... at Shiny Star Hotel... went closed... i'm interested in working for you... person who is really... If i have to do something...