No więc tak. Potrzebuję, aby ktoś sprawdził mi poniższe wypowiedzi. Czy są składne i odpowiednio napisane pod względem gramatyki. (W odpowiedzi prosże wpisać całą wypowiedź poprawioną.) Oraz pomógł mi opisać obrazek (jest w załączniku) i odpowiedział na pytania do niego. Ja to napisałam, ale chciałabym, aby to trochę bardziej rozwinąć =)
Oto wypowiedzi:
1. In my free time I reading books, listening music, watching films or sometimes soap operas and I surfing the Internet. I spend one or two hours per day to watching TV. So I don’t watch them a lot, because I prefer surfing the Internet. By the way I have others hobby. I collect film leaflets and sometimes I create web sites, but this is very difficult and laborious. I like listening pop music and I have a lot of favorite bands. I don’t play computer games, because I don’t like it. I don’t like doing sport very much, but sometimes I like go running and playing volleyball on P.E. lessons.
2. My weekend was really boring. On Saturday I went on shopping and I didn’t buy anything interesting. In the evening I watched TV programs like “Mam talent” and a lot of boring films. On Sunday I went to church and after I visited my grandparents. In the evening I was doing a lot of homework and I studying for lessons.
3. My favorite sportsman is Robert Kubica. He is a Polish racing driver. Kubica is the first and only Polish in the history of Formula 1. In 2005 he started to competes in F1 racing. Robert has got a lot of successes. For example, he victory in the Canadian Grand Prix in June 2008 and repeatedly he stood on the podium. What’s your favorite sportsman?
4. On the picture I can see boat race. It is a race between two teams. Each teams has got eight rowers. Team on the first plane has got white and black t-shirt and second team has got white and green t-shirt. On the picture I can see other boats. I think that in the boats sail judges and maybe viewers. On the background I can see a lot of people. They stay on bank of the river. I say that they rooting for the players. I think that weather on this picture is raining and cold.
5. On the picture I can see boy who rides a skateboard. He wear long trousers and T-shirt. He has got helmet on his head and pads on his hands. I think that he feeling freedom and maybe adrenaline.
Do you think the boy is doing something dangerous? What makes you think this?
Yes, because this sport is very dangerous and reckless.
Why do you think young people like doing dangerous sports.
Young people like doing dangerous sports because they like feeling adrenaline rush. Sometimes they want to show off in front of their friends. Maybe they like to be in dangerous situations.
Z góry dziękuję za pomoc =)
to co napisałaś przeczytałem i wydaje mi się że nie ma błedów.
A co do obrazka to coś wykombinowałem troche mało ale zawsze coś:
In the picture you can see the guy who runs on the board.
This is a very dangerous sport and I would recommend it to others.
There are many dangerous sports such as skateboarding, such as
walking in the mountains. For some this may seem pleasant, but not
for all.
1. In my free time I read books, listen to music, watch films, sometimes soap operas, and I surf the Internet. I spend one or two hours per day watching TV. I prefer surfing the Internet than watching TV. By the way I have other hobbies. I collect film leaflets and sometimes I create Web sites but this is very difficult and laborious. I like listening pop music and I have a lot of favorite bands. I don’t play computer games, because I don’t like it. I don’t like practising sports, but sometimes I go running and I play volleyball on P.E. lessons.
2. My weekend was really boring. On Saturday I went shopping and I didn’t buy anything interesting. All the evening I was watching TV programmes like “Mam talent” and some boring films. On Sunday I went to church and then I visited my grandparents. In the evening I had to do a lot of homework and study for lessons.
3. My favorite sportsman is Robert Kubica. He is a polish racing driver. Kubica is the first in the history polish competitor in Formula 1. His racing career has started in 2005. Robert has already got a lot of successes. For example, he won in the Canadian Grand Prix in June 2008 and repeatedly stood on the podium. And who is your favorite sportsman ?