napiszcie mi jakie są błedy w tym opowiadaniu:
Today was a great day. I woke up at 9 o`clock and I ate breakfast, I dressed and went for a walk with my dog at 11 o`clock I was watching somethink movie in tv. Then come to my my friend Kasia and we was doing homework together. About 4 pm we went for a shopping. On the way to the shop we found 50 zł. We were very happy and we was going for shop for 3 hours, we bought bracelets. Then we went to the cinema for romantic comedy. At 9 pm we left the shop. I came back to home and I was very tired , I ate supper and I went to the bed.
tłumacznie
dzisiaj był świetny dzień. wstałam o 9 i zjadłam śniadanie ubrałam się i wyszłam na spacer z psem o 11 obejzałam jakiś film w telewizji. potem przyszła do mnie przyjacióła kasia i zrobiłyśmy razem prace domową . o 16 poszłyśmy na zakupy. po drodze do sklepu znalazłyśmy 50 zł. byłyśmy bardzo szczęsliwe i chodziłyśmy po sklepach 3 godziny i kupiłyśmy sobie bransoletki. Potem poszłyśmy do ina na komedie romantyczną. o 21 wyszłyśmy ze sklepu. wróciłam do domu i byłam bardzo zmęczona , zjadłam kolacje i poszłam spać.
prosze napiszcie mi gdzie są błedy
Niestty jest troche wiecej bledow:
1. apostrof to ten znak miedzy : i | - tuz obok przycisku enter, a nie ` znaczek pod esc.
2. Naniose pewne poprawki
Today was a great day. I woke up at 9 o’clock and I ate breakfast, I dressed(got dressed)and went for a walk with my dog at 11 o'clock I was watching something (some/a) movie in (on zamiast in) tv (TV ). Then (lepiej napisac Later) I (musi byc zaimek osobowy - I) come (went) to my friend Kasia and we was (were) doing homework together. About 4 pm we went (bez for a) shopping. On the way to the shop we found 50 zł. We were very happy and we was going for shop for 3 hours( we were shopping for three hours), we bought bracelets. Then we went to the cinema for (a) romantic comedy. At 9 pm we left the shop (??? Od 4 do 9 to wiecej nic 3 godziny). I came back to(bez to) home and I was very tired , I ate supper and I went to the(bez the) bed.
3. Żeby łatwiej było się z tego rozczytać napisze wersje poprawioną
Wersja do przepisania:
Today was a great day. I woke up at 9 o’clock and I ate breakfast then I got dressed and went for a walk with my dog. At 11 o’clock I decided to watch a movie on TV. Later I went to my friend Kasia and we were doing homework together. About 4 o’clock we went shopping. On the way to the shop we found 50 zł. We were very happy and we were shopping for three hours, we bought bracelets. Then we went to the cinema for a romantic comedy. At 9 o’clock we decided to go home. I came back home and I was very tired, I ate my supper and I went to bed.
:)