Napisałam wiersz po angielsku pt. "Feels like home" i nie wiem czy to jest napisane gramatycznie i w ogóle. "Feels", so you can touch it. When you come back home You are stay on your own. You are going to your bed And it`s like your daily bread You can think there very clearly About everything And you do that dearly When you taste your mum`s cookie You stop being in a bad moody You are feeling your home by all yours senses Never meet here any fances. And "home" is not an empty word It is in its unique sort You name it in diffrent means like shelters, apartaments, cabins. Lot`s of people say: "Feel like home here" But you stay in your firmly belief That you feel homy in your flat And you are about it proud. You feel safty here and wormy But it always in your home only There`s your mother and your father Oh, I almost forgat about your brother Do you love them? Ithink you do. It`s clearly for me and for you.
you are - po are ing musi byc albo przymiotnik
Ogolnie to za duzo sensu to nie ma....
Gramatycznie jest zle bo zrobiles tak zeby sie rymowalo np nie ma moody tylko mood.
and you are proud of it
safty-safety
fortgat-forgot
nie ma takiego sensu jak np :
The day is comming
The drums are drumming