Question

Mógłby ktoś sprawdzić moje wypracowanie i poprawić w nim ewentualne błędy?

Opowiadanie jest w załączniku.

Answer 1

I was walking(nie went) and looking around.There was a huge,dark hole...

Having resolved.... to zdanie jest zle nie wiem co chcialas napisac.

I slided on the rope down (nie abseiled)Then adventure has started.

I was amused (nie awe stricker)

I whispered to myself(nie having whispered)

 I woke up ( bez  before that)

The young woman came into( nie went)

Angela brought me a coffee

lots of aliens ( a lot of to jest do liczby poj.)

They put their lives

local people (nie townspeople)

I didn't know( nie known)

but she went with me to the shaman

I listened to him(nie having listened  that)

makes aliens afraid

I was terrified(nie fearsome)

I didn't know why I had to do this(to samo zdanie pojawilo sie wczesnie w opowiadaniu)

It was difficult but within 3 days had to be done it (It was difficult but before 3 days I done that-zle)

Once I had done it,they allowed me to stay here.

I jumped with joy that I had a chance to stay(I leaped at the chance jest zle)