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Hello. I want to tell you about ways of spending free times.
Most people have their free time everyday.
A lot of people like travelling. They search for new places which they’ve never seen before. Some go to the mountain, where they can test their strength. Others go to the sea or to the lake, where they can sunbathe and swim or go on the ship.
Many people practise sport regularly in their spare time. They know that the sport is good for their health and the sport is good way of spending free time. They play football, basketball and they run.
In my town young people can go to the clubs, pubs and cinema or they can meet with friends. We have some places where we can meet, for example few pizzerias.
Some people like using computer in their free time. They have a great pleasure when they can play computer games- this is the kind of a hobby.
There are a lot of people who like staying home in their free time. They are too tired to go somewhere, so they can relax at home with their family. Some people go to see their friends or visit their families in the country. I think it’s very bad when people haven’t time for their family and they live in stress all the time.
Zdanie: Some go to the mountain, where ...
Lepiej brzmiałoby "Some of them" czyli niektórzy z nich, Ponieważ "some" oznacza też kilka, lepiej użyć, że niektórzy z nich, o których wspomniałeś we wcześniejszym zdaniu.
Poza tym, reszta jest w porządku.