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15th September
I'm going to tell you about my journey to Munich, when I was in the summer. I visited my uncle and aunt at 10 days. Munich is famous touris destination. It's the capital of Bavaria. I arrived to this city on 10th August. Then I was very tired o travelling so that day we stayed in the house. Next day we decided to walk around the city. We visited St Mary's Square and English Garden. At sunny days we rode bikes along river Isar and played cards on the beach. At the weekend we drove to the Alps. When we returned, we stopped for lunch in traditional restaurant. I ate there white sausage with mustard and pretzel. On the last day of my residence we were on Olympic Square. We pulled on to the observation tower. This visit was excellent and fantastic. I would like to visit this city again.

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I'm going to tell you about my journey to Munich in summer. I visited my uncle and aunt and stayed with them for 10 days. Munich is  a famous tourist destination. It's the capital of Bavaria. I arrived at this city on 10th August. Then I was very tired after travelling so that day we stayed in the house. Next day we decided to walk around the city. We visited St. Mary's Square and English Garden. During the sunny days we rode bikes along the river Isar and played cards on the beach. At the weekend we drove to the Alps. When we returned, we stopped for lunch at a traditional restaurant. I ate there white sausage with mustard and pretzel. On the last day of my stay we went to the Olympic Square. We went tu to the observation tower. This visit was excellent. I would like to visit this city again.