Mogę prosić o sprawdzenie poprawności tego tekstu? Hi Jenna, How are you? Hope you're fine. I'm writing to tell you that I registered to dance school. It's call "Szal". I chose this school, because my mum's friend, Ana, teaches there. I dance with John. He's very handsome. He have blond hair, blue eyes and dances very good. At the fist lesson, there was a problem. I didn't have special dancing shoes, but one girl from my class lend me one couple. I have to go now. Love, xyz
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Hi Jenna, How are you? I hope you're fine. I'm writing to tell you that I have joined a dance school called "Szal". I choosed this school because my mum's friend, Ana, teaches there. My partner's name is John. He is very handsome. He has a blond hair, blue eyes and he is an awesome dancer. At the first lesson there was a problem; I didn't have special dancing shoes, but one of the girls from my class lend me one pair. I have to go now. Love, xyz
How are you? I hope you're fine. I'm writing to tell you that I have joined a dance school called "Szal". I choosed this school because my mum's friend, Ana, teaches there. My partner's name is John. He is very handsome. He has a blond hair, blue eyes and he is an awesome dancer. At the first lesson there was a problem; I didn't have special dancing shoes, but one of the girls from my class lend me one pair. I have to go now.
Love, xyz