Mogę prosić o sprawdzenie poprawności tego tekstu? Hi Jenna, How are you? Hope you're fine. I'm writing to tell you that I registered to dance school. It's call "Szal". I chose this school, because my mum's friend, Ana, teaches there. I dance with John. He's very handsome. He have blond hair, blue eyes and dances very good. At the fist lesson, there was a problem. I didn't have special dancing shoes, but one girl from my class lend me one couple. I have to go now. Love, xyz
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Hi Jenna, How are you? Hope you're fine. I'm writing to tell you that I HAVE JOINED / BECOME A MEMBER OF A dance school. It's call "Szal". I chose this school because my mum's friend, Ana, teaches there. I dance with John. He's very handsome. He haS blond hair, blue eyes and dances very WELL.ON the fiRST lesson there was a problem. I didn't have special dancing shoes, but one girl from my class lenT me one PAIR.I have to go now. Love, xyz
How are you? Hope you're fine. I'm writing to tell you that I HAVE JOINED / BECOME A MEMBER OF A dance school. It's call "Szal". I chose this school because my mum's friend, Ana, teaches there. I dance with John. He's very handsome. He haS blond hair, blue eyes and dances very WELL.ON the fiRST lesson there was a problem. I didn't have special dancing shoes, but one girl from my class lenT me one PAIR.I have to go now.
Love, xyz