Mam tu tekst po angielsku napisany przez siebie. Już bez polskiego tłumaczenia sprawdźcie czy mam mniej więcej dobrze. Jakieś propozycje lepszego ułożenia zdania mile widziane ;)
Lat tuesday my class and some students from other classes were in theater in Elbląg on ,,Christmas Carol''. We arrived scholl at 9 o'clock. In bus we were talking and having a good time. In good moods we entered to theater. There were warm and pleasantly. When our english teacher bought tickets we went to room. There where a olt off other people: adults and children. We were very exciting. The art was about mean Ebenezer Scrooge. He was old and the most important thing on his life were money. . on Christmas Eve he sow three ghosts. They shown him his early life, family and the man he was once. Ebenezer understood his mistakes and became a diffrent man. He gave money for the poor people, presents for his worker's family and he bacame reconciled withs his nephew. The play was interestinh and touching. It teached ous that we could be friendly and help people, that family is important thing in our life. Everybody were satisfied , but tried after a long play. We came back to school at 1 o'clock and told with friends about art with friends.
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Last Tuesday ( to pisze się z dużej) ....theatre ...We entered to the theatre in very good moods. Tego zdania 'there were...' nie łapie - jeśli chodzi o miejsce to "There was warm and pleasantly " . We were very excited. The play was about ... - jeśli chcesz powiedzieć 'sztuka' w sensie spektakl to jest 'play' nie 'art'. He was old and the most important thing in his life was money. On Christmas Eve he saw. They showed him....- wystarczy past simple. Ebenezer.....and became a different man. ....and he became reconviled with .... The play was interesting and touching. It teached us that we should be friendly and help people.... Everybody...... but TIRED..... ....and we talked about play. Sorry, że tak zadaniami , ale nie chciało mi się wszystkiego przepisywać <3
We were very excited.
The play was about ... - jeśli chcesz powiedzieć 'sztuka' w sensie spektakl to jest 'play' nie 'art'.
He was old and the most important thing in his life was money.
On Christmas Eve he saw.
They showed him....- wystarczy past simple.
Ebenezer.....and became a different man.
....and he became reconviled with ....
The play was interesting and touching.
It teached us that we should be friendly and help people....
Everybody...... but TIRED.....
....and we talked about play.
Sorry, że tak zadaniami , ale nie chciało mi się wszystkiego przepisywać <3