Mam napisać krótkie wypracowanie i chciałabym żemy mi ktoś kto się na tym zna sprawdził błędy. Chodzi też o to żeby zdania byly napisane w Pres. Count., ale w kontekście zaplanowanej przyszłości. Oto tekst:
For two months I'm going to Sport Camp only for girls. The camp's starting from a small town near Warsaw-Gimtrun, on second holiday's Saturday morning at 7.00 a.m. All off girls who will be there must take with herself tent or sleeping bag, lanterm and many another little thinks which be necessary to live in a forest. We're taking only sport clothes- we aren't taking any jewellery and cosmetics or phone becouse it's not permited
On a camp for two weeks we're doing many thinks for health and fun like, long march, running or special exercisec. For me-thats sounds great!
After two weeks we're going to home..by cycling to the special house. A five the fastest girls will take prize. Then our parents are going us to home.
It is amazing camp, isn't it?
For two months I'm going to a Sport Camp only for girls. The camp's starting from a small town near Warsaw-Gimtrun, on second holiday's Saturday morning at 7.00 a.m. Everybody has to take a tent, a sleeping bag, a latern and many little things which are necessary to live in a forest. We're taking only sport clothes- we aren't taking any jewellery and cosmetics or mobile phones because it's forbidden. On the camp we're doing many exercises for health and fun like long marches or running. In my opinion that sounds great! After two weeks we're cycling to the special place. The fastest five girls will win some prizes. Then our parents are going to take us to home. It is amazing camp, isn't it?
Myślę, że będzie lepiej ;))