czy ktoś może mi sprawdzić pracę... list z angla.. będę wdzięczna
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing to congratulate you on the success of World Travel Exhibition and to put forward a few idea associated with exhibition for next time.
Firstly, On exhibiton were only known people would be better invite young artist. the artists could show your work of arts. Perhaps work of arts to arouse interest of visitors. It could be help promote young artist.
Secondly, despite the fact that The exhibiton was fantastic however include only landscapes mountains. I must admit that it isn't interesting and boring. The picture would show shape ground and the exhibiton would be interesting.
Then,The people couldn't affordable to see exhibition. I think that a good idea would be reduce price a ticket. It could atract many visitors.
Lastly, The exhibition was last short-time. I suggest that it could be at least two week. In addition more people could see this fantastic work of arts
I hope that you find the above suggestion useful.I look forward to your prompt reply.
Your faithfully,
I am writing to you to congratulate you on success of World Travel Exhibition and to put forward a few idea associated with exhibition for next time.
Ja bym tylko to pierwsze zdanie poprawi bo tak brzmi lepiej ale tak to dobrze :)