Sprawdzi ktoś mi list formalny, tylko błagam niech zajmie się tym osoba,która się na tym zna, bo to na ocenę, a wiem, że są w nim jakieś błędy.
Dear Sir/Madam,I am writing in connection with your advertisement about a student exchange programme which i found in "The English Time" two days ago. I would be very pleased if you could send me some extra information about this offer.Firstly, I would like to know how long this exchange programme lasts and in which countries in Europe the students can go.I really know whether the meals are included in host families and what type of accomodation is offered. I would be grateful if you could inform me about the number of students in classes at local schools.I would like to know whether the students have any free time during the day and where they usually come from. I would be interested in knowing when 'limited time'ends and what type of prizes youth can win.It will be amazing if you could send me booklet with additional information regarding your exchange programme.Thanking you in advance for your time and assistance. I look foward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.Yours faithfully,XYZ
*Sorry, tak mi się skopiowało z notatnika, a nie chce mi się przepisywać, wiem, jak schematycznie ma wyglądać ten list.
Dear Sir/Madam,I am writing in connection with your advertisement about a student exchange programme which i found in "The English Time" two days ago. I would be very pleased if you could send me some extra information about this offer.Firstly, I would like to know how long this exchange programme lasts and in which countries in Europe the students can go.I really know whether the meals are included in host families and what type of accomodation is offered. I would be grateful if you could inform me about the number of students in classes at local schools.I would like to know whether the students have any free time during the day and where they usually come from. I would be interested in knowing when 'limited time'ends and what type of prizes youth can win.It will be amazing if you could send me booklet with additional information regarding your exchange programme.Thanking you in advance for your time and assistance. I look foward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.Yours faithfully,XYZ
*Sorry, tak mi się skopiowało z notatnika, a nie chce mi się przepisywać, wiem, jak schematycznie ma wyglądać ten list.
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Firstly, I would like to know how long this exchange programme lasts and in which countries of Europe the students can go.I really would like to know if the meals are included in host families and what type of accomodation is offered. I would be grateful if you could inform me about the number of students in classes at local schools.I would like to know whether the students have any free time during the day and where they usually come from. I would like to know when 'limited time' ends and what type of prizes teenagers can win.It would be amazing if you could send me a booklet with additional information regarding your exchange programme.Thank you in advance for your time and assistance. I am looking foward to hearing you at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,XYZ
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