Ktos może sprawdzić błedy ???
Dear Georg,
How are you? I hope you're very well. I've got so much to tell you that I don't know how to begin.
I've got a great news for you. Last week I went to theater and I wachted magic show. It was incredible so I decided to go to magic school. On first lesson I learned new and amazing trick. I think it’s super hobby
On lesson of course I wasn’t alone. I met some friendly and talkative persons. Next day we spent all day together. They are cool people.
In my opinion the most beautiful girl is Katy. She is smart and mature. She will organise pool party and she invite me so I going to go.
I'm waiting for your quick answer
Dear Magazine,
In my life is one special person who I can say everything. It’s my best friend Georgina. She is smart and so talkative.
We meet everyday In school and we talk so much. We are so crazy because sometimes when we are on break we scream and shout and then everybady look at us. Always when I had problem she help me. When she had problem I help she too. I love when she come to me and we play computer games or talk about our friends from school. Sometimes she is selfish but I think that is because she has so much problems.
She is my best friend and I was never change her for someone different.
I'm waiting for your quick answer
wszystko jest dobrze <3
ale w drugim tekście powinno być zamiast "everybady" to "everybody"
When she has problem I help (napisałeś she, a powinno być her) too
I love when she comes to me and
to tyle <3
Last week I went to theater and I was watching magic show.
Always when I have problem she helps me. When she has problem I help her too.