Dear Cristiano, At the beginning of my letter I wish you all the best and I want to say happy birthday because of your 30th birthday. I want to congratulate you because of your won in The Golden Ball 2014’s competition too. I’m your great fan and I think that you really deserved for that prize.
My name is Kacper Mańkowski and I’m 8 years old. I live in Poland, in Wolsztyn, near Poznań. I love playing football since I only remember and I want to be like you in the feature. I know everything about you, but I’m also the great fun of Real Madrid FC. I’m a member of grodzisk’s football club and such as you I’m attacker.
I really want to meet with you in the feature. My dream is also have your autograph. I invite you to come to Poland, it’s wonderful country, and if you come to my town I will show you many of very interesting thinks in Wolsztyn.
Once again happy birthday and I hope that we will be able to meet each other in the feature. Best of luck, Kacper
Vroengard
Nie potrzebne jest for na końcu pierwszego akapitu. wystarczy samo "deserve that prize". Końcówka drugiego akapitu - "I'm an attacker". Trzeci akapit - "I really want to meet you", " My dream is also to have", "I will show you a lot of very interesting things in Wolsztyn".
To są takie małe pojedyncze błędy. A tak poza tym to tekst jest całkiem niezły:)
Końcówka drugiego akapitu - "I'm an attacker".
Trzeci akapit - "I really want to meet you", " My dream is also to have", "I will show you a lot of very interesting things in Wolsztyn".
To są takie małe pojedyncze błędy. A tak poza tym to tekst jest całkiem niezły:)